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Trade and Enterprise is when we make a Project and try and make money, for auction to buy objects like a toy or a lolly. When you still have PTs you can put your PTs in the bank for the next auction.
With a ?Trade and Enterprise is when we make a Project been made and bough Do you know what owe group called? for auction to buy objects, When you still have PTs pieces you can put your PTs in the bank for the next auction.
With a !Trade and Enterprise is when we make a Project and try and make money, For auction to buy objects like a toy or a lolly, When you still have PTs you can put your PTs in the bank for the next auction. See that you don’t miss out!
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Trade and Enterprise is when we make a Project and try and make money,We are selling it for 4 pt because we are doing drums and we have to get all of the wood and stuff. When you still have pts you can put your pts in the bank for the next auction.
You orientate your reader well by explaining what your writing will be about. I also like the different ways you have tried to hook in the reader. Which is your favourite.
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